This has a lot of very strong excellent elements, such as the story, colour pallet and main image. However, it isn't quite there yet. In order to exceed your target grade you need to work on the layout of the minor images.
Overall, your practical work demonstrates excellent in the following areas: * Producing material appropriate to target audience * Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout * Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes * Accurately using language and register * Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task * Appropriately integrating illustration and text * Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set * Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing
This has a lot of very strong excellent elements, such as the story, colour pallet and main image. However, it isn't quite there yet. In order to exceed your target grade you need to work on the layout of the minor images.
ReplyDeleteOverall, your practical work demonstrates excellent in the following areas:
ReplyDelete* Producing material appropriate to target audience
* Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout
* Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes
* Accurately using language and register
* Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task
* Appropriately integrating illustration and text
* Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set
* Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing